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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Not bad

You really need an editor to review your work. This could have been a great story.

RodThrustinRodThrustinover 5 years ago
A Little Charity

I gave you 5 stars for the horny factor, but, yeah, you need to get an editor or edit yourself better, and get rid of those annoying typos.

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Ok because of requests here is a bit about me (us). I'm a 50 something female about 5'3" tall and 120 pounds. I've been married to my honey for 25+ years and we have great sex. I'm not a model but I get my fair share of attention even at my age. I do most of the writing bu...