All Comments on 'Hot Tub Surprise'

by JadisCarroway

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DianeRedfernDianeRedfernabout 7 years ago
Lovely story beautifully told

Loved the way you peeled the onion or should I say the nine-inch cock. Interesting names, more interesting sex .Made me so wet.

xoxo,

Di

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Very good story

Many women can learn from Terra's techniques. She set the whole thing up and played him like a fiddle. Fun and exciting story

seldomlastsseldomlastsabout 7 years ago
Excellent story

Very sweet and hot, and even somewhat realistic dialogue and scenario, a tough combo to pull off. Bravo!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
good

I love the story, would like if Jadis got her own spin off also, she sounds hot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Please continue next part with more shemales and scolding and abuse

Please continue next part with more shemales and scolding and abuse

JadisCarrowayJadisCarrowayalmost 7 years agoAuthor
More shemales

My story Plunder Party is also about shemales, only it's not so warm and fuzzy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good story

One of the hottest stories ever. I hope there is a sequel.

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