All Comments on 'Hot Tubbin' on Mother's Day'

This was a very nice story. It had the feeling of being something from real life.

Thank you for sharing

First time commenter and I enjoyed the description and the premise. Wanted to read about mom getting it on with the daughter and daughter-in-law. Easy to overlook the typos.

Great story! I sure hope that you'll be working on a part 2 please. Keep up the good work!

Loved it all, there has to be a follow up.

WOW! This was a brilliant story, plenty of family fucking! Very descriptive and Hot! There's got to be a follow up to this surely!

by far one of the best ever written I stayed hard and had multiple orgasms... hope she writes more stories

Delightful romp...sexy and fun! Somehow I've missed your work, but look forward to checking out your other stories!

Wow. Keep it up.

Tiki, i very much enjoyed reading your story, and could visualise the whole thing in my head, that in my opinion makes it so much more enjoyable. I particularly enjoyed the mother and son encounter as this is my freaky fantasy. Keep the good work up and look forward to more stories.

thanks bestie59

Great story! Definitely made me hard. Also, I love the shorter stories rather than the 7 or 8 pagers some write.

This is super sexy... and very well written. I wish there was more. Hopefully we see Dottie, Wendy, and Brandee again. I'll definitely be reading the rest of your work. The taboo nature of it is SO hot. Thanks!

Loved the description of the women's voluptuous bodies and the dirty dialogue. Thanks for sharing. Can't wait to read more!

This has got to be your best work. Good set-up, great characters and nice believable events, oh, and extremely erotic. Inhibitions down and people deciding to just go with the flow. I can see how your writing has been evolving from your first submission to this one. Its getting better and better. I don't know if i would continue this story. Great the way it is. I want to see what you give us next. Another girl and other family another event. You make them hot!

Such a wonderfully delicious story! I can't wait to read more of your submissions.

I was hard through out most of this one! I love how you describe in such erotic detail all of your characters bodies ! Yum again !

Sincerely a fan!

Fun to read. Erotic and well thought out.

Another amazing story. Loved it and I especially loved how descriptive and detailed everything was. That made it so much more arousing.

I love the detail of your stories! It makes it so much more realistic! Definitely keeps me hard and interested throughout. I'm a big fan of your stories and am looking forward to reading more. Maybe the christmas shopping series will be my next.

What also makes this story soo hot is thinking of the hot hot picture of the author and thinking of her as the mom!

Just wow!!! A super charged story. Loved it. 5 stars!

I loved this one, such great use of words to cast a spell over the readers and transport us right into your vision. You totally excel at this theme like no one else, looking forward to more from you as always

Jean

This story is the first for me and if that indicates the quality, I am eager to read more. THANK YOU.

This is my second story tonight

There is something so sexy and stimulating about a family loving together

After reading and seeing your biography it was hard (sic) not envisioning your face as Dottie

One sexy story and lady

Loved it. You do a great story!

very sexy read. 5 stars. loved it

Just the talk between Dottie and her husband as she "convinces" him to go the hot tub party for mothers day. thats it, thats why i gave this story 5 stars. it just amused me on such a level that i really didnt read the rest and came right to the rating and comment section lol.