All Comments on 'Hot Wife Tanya Cheating'

Yep, just what this site needed...yet another foray into the blackness known as cuck wimp/hot wife bullshit. For God's sake can you not come up with something a little bit original???!!!!!! Every time I have been on the site lately it's been like "Groundhog Day" but with cuckold tales instead. Enough already!

I am firmly of the same opinion as '26thNC' on this. The author is not a storyteller but, who knows, that may come.I felt more erotic reaction to the author's comment in her biography than this whole story..... attagirl! Not much in the way of 'stars' in this story's future I suspect and precious little from me. If you consider continuing the tale of these two unfortunate 'characters' I would read it. Thank You anyway.

one star

Know this kind horse poo should have its own category so the rest of us would not even need to see the title. Yuk!

so if she was a "hot wife" in an open marriage where is the cheating? Yes, it is adultery I guess by definition but unless she is breaking some rule between spouses she is just doing what a "hot wife" does.

But as for the story here, not very sexy and not erotic. Quick dump of a few words.

after reading the title and description. IF the wife has permission IT ISN'T CHEATING, IS IT?

She's just another cheating slut carrying around multiple social diseases. That's not "hot" - that's "nasty". And not in a good way. Is she really THAT stupid? I would expect him to file for a divorce and avoid her like the plague.

1 star

Yeah I think they have said it already it’s garbage. The most stupidest thing as they have said already is the title . Anyway the other things you must be still wet behind the ears or you are blind or something. This is your second attempt and one of the most stupidest one have you not noticed how swamped the loving wife category is with these boring stories. These stories lack imagination and creativity and they feel like are written by kids . And you have just written one of these stories ones we usually get from newbies. Your first attempt started off wisely by starting off in the groups away from the loving wife category which was great . Then you write this starting to make me think why didn’t you start off with this story first then we would have been a bit lenient on you being your first attempt. But now you are a complete fool everyone nearly knows how bad the loving wife category is it’s swamped with this type of stories. And they are from newbies even the writers that usually write this sort of garbage have stopped at the moment because of the influx from newbies trying to make there mark on this site . Then you go and add this pile of garbage you should of stayed in the group category not in the loving wife category. This is now just going to be dumped on a pile and forgotten or fall between the cracks or lost never to be returned you get the idea. The only thing making big in the loving wife category is the BTB stories your stories are just ten a penny or not worth a read or walk on no matter how I put it you really screwed up . The other thing was that this story clearly was not checked not read though or nothing that shows also of a poor writer. So next story want you to try a different category and have fun with your imagination and creativity and let’s just say that if they ask about this story just say you were drunk when you wrote it ok . So back to the drawing board go write a story you have got tons of different category’s to choose from like from romance to nonConsent just stay away from the loving wife category unless you want to attempt to write a Burn The Bitch story. Then good luck these stories will push your imagination and creativity to there limits the cheating bit is quite easy it’s the revenge bit of the story that needs the imagination and creativity on how the hurting husband gets his revenge on the cheating wife and lover and burns them . But the hurt husband walks off with his head up high and walks off into the sunset with everything ( new wife kids money etc) you get the idea . And before you think this is one sided yes there are many female writers that write this sort of things and they do get a lot of respect just because it’s a BTB story doesn’t mean every BTB has been written by a man . Ok I’m going off track here so your story right was poor unimaginable story just don’t stop writing stories just because of this story just go have fun but remember that there is more than 2 categories on this site just leave the loving wife category alone unless you want to write a BTB story. So go spread your imagination and creativity in another category and just write this story off as a bad memory ok

Can't agree with the previous comments. The story is fine but perhaps you could add a little more character development or intimacy. I like your use of metaphors. Keep writing.

Of course the whorewife has her cuck husbands permission. Otherwise she would be just another cheating whore.