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by NotHemingway

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KinPAKinPAalmost 3 years ago

Good story concept, but it felt rushed and only partially developed.

NotHemingwayNotHemingwayalmost 3 years agoAuthor

Thank you for the feedback. The conciseness of the story stems from my own view that many of the stories on this site spend too much time on build-up that doesn’t contribute to the erotic theme. The success of a story should be measured by how well it generates an erotic feeling. We’re not Hemingway, after all. But I value readers’ opinions, and I’ll keep your comments in mind.

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I write for a living, although not fiction. I enjoy stories where the eroticism flows from the narrative, and the specifics are left to one's imagination. I am often accused of being short on descriptions of sex acts, but I'm trying to do better in that regard. All comments...