All Comments on 'Hotel Cafe'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Nice...

There are some nice touches of humour in the story, but you really need to either find a good editor or use your spellchecker. There were quite a few spelling mistakes, and that is never a good thing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Hehe

I liked it, it was cute, kind of romantic, and kinky. Very sexy ^^

GaladreyilGaladreyilabout 12 years ago
ooooooh

So hot. I so want more of this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Delicious

Great story. Very satisfying

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