Hotel Room Lottery Ch. 08

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If you've made it this far, thank you for following along with this strange little story. It is done. All of the characters ended up where I hoped they would land. I doubt that I'll ever revisit this family. At this point, I think they've earned a long rest. They need some time to raise them damned kids.

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Foxterot7aFoxterot7a10 months ago

This was a very good series. It is so well written that I could actually picture this family. They stuck together throughout. They cared for each other in every way possible. With the exception of the two outsiders introduced during Christmas, they always understood each other. They knew everyone better demeaner and their faults. They dealth with exterinal and internal threats as a family. Although the author wants to give this family a rest, the potential for another great series is there.

nicho1855nicho1855over 2 years ago

A great series. I especially enjoyed chapter 6 where a young Ully saves Maddy from being attacked by her boyfriend. There is so much more you could write about this story, such as, how Olly and Courtney got together.

AllyB973AllyB973over 2 years ago
MORE, PLEASE!

More, please! We need a conclusion on Jasmine's baby and Heather and if Sarah's baby is Uly's!

EZ8ltEZ8ltover 2 years ago

Actually it's rather half finished. Sure Maddison had her baby, but what about Courtney? Mad wanted to shove her out but we didn't know if that happened, also nothing about if Sarah got pregnant by Ully or not, and zilch about Jasmine or how Heather ended up. There's so many unfinished plotline in this.

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