All Comments on 'Hotter'

The characters cum alive with your magic pen.

Alwaystaboo

I liked this story.. All the tension was in the people and not the genetiles and that's a nice change. Although I'm not above a little bedroom activity, I liked it like this story, a little in the end pretty much the way normal folks might do it.

Great story, thanks

Ted

Thank you to ExperiencedStoryTeller for editing and putting up with my nervousness and fracturing of the English language. Widow