All Comments on 'Hotter'

Thank you to ExperiencedStoryTeller for editing and putting up with my nervousness and fracturing of the English language. Widow

I liked this story.. All the tension was in the people and not the genetiles and that's a nice change. Although I'm not above a little bedroom activity, I liked it like this story, a little in the end pretty much the way normal folks might do it.

Great story, thanks

Ted

The characters cum alive with your magic pen.

Alwaystaboo