All Comments on 'Hotter'n the Devil's Balls Ch. 01'

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HottieOlwen about 1 year ago

This 'older man/younger woman' tale is beautifully written, and the hint at the end of this opening chapter of what is to come (cum?) in future episodes bodes well. You've created two very credible characters, here, Dg, and when they come to you for the film rights, make sure that you insist on casting Jodie Foster as Callie! I can't wait for the next installment. This one gets 5 stars.

naughtyandy4u about 1 year ago

Oh yes, really liking this one. There is a hint of mystery in her background, great chemistry between them. Look forward to the dream becoming reality.

Cheers, Andy

raraewriter about 1 year ago

You always please with your story line and intrigue. Looking forward to the next chapter.

KingCuddle about 1 year ago

NO! No damn fair!

Get your butt back to your keyboard!

Anonymousabout 1 year ago

more please! :)

blackknight314 10 months ago

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

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