by AllenWelsh
For a short story that went down hill very fast.
You'll get hammered for it not being in incest.
You'll get hammered for it being a shoddy bit of writing
You'll get hammered for there being a wimp husband.
You'll get hammered for her being a cheat.
Other than that, I'm sure you'll do fine...
Too weird. Should have been in the incest/taboo section. Most readers of this category are not into that.
Queue Jaws music...... nevermind just another troll in the Loving Wives group.
This might have done better if the Fetish Forum. The "Loving Wives" forum is the hardest forum to make anyone happy, and you'll get crucified quicker here than in any forum on the site. Not to mention you lost points for not Finishing The Damn Story. That alone gets the natives restless. So just a warning, the crap will fly soon enough.
I think that is one stupid husband and one selfish and mean hearted slut of a wife .
Ignore the critics. Write what you like. The story scored more than 3 so that means more than 1/2 like it. It’s got a reads to favorited ratio of 600 something which is about average. Understand that in the loving wives category there is a very vocal group of people who hate any type of story where a woman does anything with a man who is not her husband and doesn’t die for it. They’re called BTB or Burn The Bitch stories.
I’m going to brag for a second. Out of 94000 authors on this site I am rated #14. Check the favorites portal. I get all the same comments as you. If you want to see the comments I get check out my story, ‘you only think you’re in control,’ it has over 300 comments.
To be honest. I liked the story. The only part I didn’t like was the fake tits part, but that’s just something that turns me off.
Don’t be discouraged by people who say they want more story. I freely admit I write porn. This was porn. Enjoy it.
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