All Comments on 'Hotwife Rosy Pt. 01'

Love watching my wife ride a big cock ! Specifically if she shares the guy with me ! The bigger the blacker the better !!

When story starts with "34DD breast" you know not to expect anything.

Good story, but please, please get some editing help! The run-on sentences, no quotation marks, it all makes it hard to read. Keep writing, though.

Good story, but poorly written. You need an editor

Poorly written is correct. Your paragraphs are insanely long and almost unreadable. Get yourself an editor.

An excellent start. Please continue.

You need work on writing a story. Your dialogue and sentences are all jumbled into on long paragraph, making it hard to read. Try using quotation marks and separating the dialogue from the paragraph.

Another story that alludes to one thing and delivers another. Why do you talk about the first wife and then jump into this wife exposing herself to a stranger as if in an attempt to seduce him?

Hot!, but you need to proofread much better. Full of grammar errors and run-on sentences that need to be broken up. It drags on the story and makes you re-read. Very detracting.

Having your wife become another man's slut especially when he has a real cock is invigorating. Cuckold life is fantastic!!!

awesome. Keep it up!

Put your fucked up black cock whore bullshit on the correct category.

The story was great. I have been down this road in real life and enjoy my wife with another man. I would say, if it was written for me, I would drop the adj's used like into her married Pussy, and just say dumping his big load, or large load into my wifes, or her pussy. I think reading the story should be like I would speak it to you in the garage while we were working on your truck in your shop. Common language. I can't wait for part two. I had part two with a lady name blue dolphin. She was a great lady and loved sex as much as i did in my 50's and as my wife was starting to learn to relax and share her body with other men and seeing me with other ladies her only fear was that I would leave her for another lady. My wife of 46 year together and 14.5 yrs. married went home to heaven with a smile on her face and no pain. Her Love, Kirby went home to heaven last Thursday. Kirby died from a bee sting of all the things that could have got him in life and war, it was a bee that killed him, but he died on his land in the country and two ladies by his side and one waiting for him in heaven. Johnny

Pleas correct your grammar and lack of punctuation, good first story though.

Great story! Looking forward to Part 2. I always prefer scenes/stories with the husband watching his wife with others, rather than sending her off on her own. I also like bareback, cum-inside sex in stories stories, condom use in stories always detracts from the story. IMHO.