by LordOfThePants
I really liked your story. I don't usually like CBT but the spanking, bondage and anticipation made it all fit together. How about another? I will keep an eye out for it.
oldog
Many women can learn how to train a young man by reading this story. Young men need discipline and control. Often an older , experienced woman can do it best. Keep writing, stay real and consistent
Needs lots of help! Spelling...grammer...word useage...a little proofreading would make this so much better! And... spanking his balls... really? Over the top and dangerous!!! Otherwise nice stroker!