All Comments on 'House Call'

by LordOfThePants

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oldoginaloldoginalalmost 13 years ago
Great Story!

I really liked your story. I don't usually like CBT but the spanking, bondage and anticipation made it all fit together. How about another? I will keep an eye out for it.

oldog

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
New talent!

Great first story. I would love to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Good story - proper training

Many women can learn how to train a young man by reading this story. Young men need discipline and control. Often an older , experienced woman can do it best. Keep writing, stay real and consistent

0ra11yfix8ed0ra11yfix8edalmost 13 years ago
Good but....

Needs lots of help! Spelling...grammer...word useage...a little proofreading would make this so much better! And... spanking his balls... really? Over the top and dangerous!!! Otherwise nice stroker!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
slave

Oh to be in his palce and feel her furry

HotAss4UHotAss4U4 months ago

OMG. Wonderful. Such a lucky boy. More please, a lot more.

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