All Comments on 'House Hunting With Suzy'

But you seemed to struggle quite a bit. While I did find it mildly erotic, I just found it hard to concentrate on what you were trying to describe. A few of the scenes also seemed a bit unrealistic.

This story was too confusing and lacked the meaningful eroticism that is needed in these fantasy stories. If you continue, perhaps you need to introduce Suzy wanting to have a baby with you. It would be quite easy to introduce this with you buying this place and being closer to her so you could continue fucking her. Also, analism is not a turn on for me. Maybe others prefer to rate you higher, but I am giving you my honest opinion and rating.

Hey don,

How is it hanging Don? Still not able to make a woman pregnant your self?

Sorry writer, this should be about your story. I second the opinion of the other cmmenters. Maybe you should work harder on a clear storyline befour you write and submit another story.

Succes