All Comments on 'House of Cards Ch. 04'

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desertdog43desertdog43almost 5 years ago
If her marriage is no. #1

Why's she screwing old "eddie" ??

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
What ?

I would have told her to leave My Office . And I would have told her I would send copies of the tape to her family if She didn't leave My Office .. Then I would have sent the tapes to her Family as Christmas presents anyway .

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
RAAC, as usual.

Sorry, you're a good writer, but your stories suck. You always make the husband so pussy-whipped that it's impossible to empathize with him. You always have the main characters reflect about how devastatingly beautiful their wives are, as if that's reason enough to ignore their cheating. No husband would see her as being beautiful at this point... all he would see is a cheap, sniveling tramp who's sorry she got caught.

Your writing is strong, but your stories are so effeminately weak. And it's got nothing to do with wanting a BTB. It has nothing to do with forgiveness. Forgiveness doesn't require him to stay with her and, since the act of forgiving her will eventually bring the husband peace of mind, I'm all for it.

It has everything to do with the difference between a Reconciliation and a Reconciliation-At-All-Cost. One happens organically because it was earned, the other happens because the writer simply cannot envision anything else.

You're already telegraphing a RAAC for no other reason than she's beautiful, she's crying, and he feels sorry for her. Poor baby. They deserve each other.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Hmmmm....

He is lacking some venom in his veins, he could have threatened with letting the kids hear the tapes if she didn't give him space.

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Still waiting

Still waiting for the ax to fall, but she will talk her way out of it.. A good of a writer as Ohio is, he can't burn even a deserving cheating wife.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
BS

Tell the bitch to go rot in hell.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
WHY??

Why do you depict all of your main Male characters as weak willed pussy whipped wimps?

Artie88Artie88about 4 years ago
COLD DISPASSIONATE IDIOT

This is BULLSHIT.

Why was no lawyer involved ASAP?

Why no divorce proceedings???

Has she so damaged his ego that he cannot act?

Artie88Artie88about 4 years ago
WHY THE WIMP??

Is this going the way of the cuckold?

Sure seems to be.

While author is trying so hard to walk that line between revengeful victim and considerate wimp, with the main character flip flopping between those two roles, he is really painting this wuss as the worst of both characterizations.

Will he ever make up his mind????

NitpicNitpicalmost 4 years ago
Where

Where is all this crap heading.?I don't want to read the remaining chapters and find at the end he takes the slut back,he should just dump her no more talking.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
I Sense A Collapse Coming

Oh, poor little Marianne. Tom is being so mean to her...not accepting her fucking Eddie, a child rapist, for over a month. "No one (not even my husband Tom) can do me like you do." The affair would rage on indefinitely if Tom had not got courtroom proof of it's existence. A marriage is like your small child. If you went into their room and shot and killed one of your children, would you expect your husband to put it behind, and accept your absence from the marriage? This is why I have NO tolerance for reconciliations. During this time Eddie has known all about Tom, but Tom doesn't even know Eddie's last name. Why hasn't Tom started divorce proceedings on Anni? Maybe then she would have a glimmer of the pain she has unleashed on Tom. Tom needs to go to Marianne's bosses and tell them of the shitpool of trouble Tom plans to inflict upon their client Eddie.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
She's hurting too???

First of all, he gave her the chance to talk and she continually lied. Very easily, I might add. Why is she hurting too. If she is hurting it was all her own doing. He did nothing to deserve how she disrespected him. The "blow and go" on their anniversary should have told him something about her lack of respect.

Any conversation is going to hurt his feelings more than the recording did. It can only make things worse for him.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Screwed Up Logic

His sweet wife wanted to stay married and not hurt her husband. Her first priority was their marriage because she worked so hard to hide the affair. What the fuck?! The idiot believes that crap? What kind of screwed up logic is that? Clearly her first priority was the affair and to keep her ignorant husband on a leash. Even after confronted with the evidence she wants to explain that it wasn't what he thought.

What should be that absolute point of no return is when she tells Eddie, in a conversation that she doesn't think her husband will hear, that she screwed up and Tom found out and some of the stuff he recorded was, gasp, X-Rated. She apologizes to the dude she was cheating with. She doesn't feel that she screwed up by having the affair only in that she got caught and she tells Eddie that she is sorry. She says "I tried everything I could to keep him from finding out, but I blew it." She is sad the affair has to end and will always have fond memories of the times he had his dick inside her. "Yes, Eddie, of course it was great for me too. I'll never forget it either."

There is no way in hell this dope of a husband should ever let her give an explanation for what she did or even talk to her again for that matter, but the bitch gets to torture him even more that evening. He should already know the unmitigated truth but he somehow thinks just because she says she wants to stay married and says that she loves him and says that her marriage comes first that those words actually mean anything. Again, when she is saying she is sorry she is really only saying that she is sorry that she got caught. Tom is now in the territory of getting everything he deserves for being a first class dumbass.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Just

another beta male cuck. Why can't authors write men as men instead of weak, needy, indecisive little cunts?

amygdalaamygdalaabout 3 years ago

I'm binge reading this shit..so i haven't read the next chapter. But i hope there is no RAAC shit going on. Someone who can fuck her side piece till her pussy is sore on her wedding anniversary then smile in her husband face. Then can lie and manipulate her husband and family in the intervening days, weeks and months is not someone you can ever trust.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

He should have called Security or the police and had her cheating ass arrested. And why move out of the house? I know the whole "changing the locks" thing has become a cliche, but it really is stupid for the wronged spouse to move out of the house; that is usually the most significant marital asset.

Finchy1955Finchy1955almost 3 years ago

Can't make my mind up?

But if its heading where I think it might be hoing

Ie forgiving her and re-connecting that would be a great shame after the complete disrespect and lying

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

"I've known Marianne for years, and she just adores you! I know you must be unbelievably upset, but please don't forget what a great marriage you have had until now."

"Thank you, Andrea," I said with a sigh. "I know in my brain that what you say is true."

This is actually proof that his brain doesn't function well. AND, he feels better that she put her "marriage" first and wasn't planning to leave him? What a fucking cuck. He's happy to be her fall back position. A weak, needy cunt of a man. This is the stock cliche of a LW husband character.

skruff101skruff101over 2 years ago

After hearing the final tape he’s thinking “She wasn't leaving me for Eddie” what the fuck difference does that make?

Once again it’s only chapter four but we all know the outcome.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

He is a weak pathetic cuckold simp who should be sucking Eddie's cum out of her pussy, or do the noble thing and jump off a bridge.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Well, no more for me. He hears her telling her lover, "I'll never forget it either." And then she threatens her husband with "And as they drag me out I'll tell everyone you work with how my husband has left me, won't speak to me, and won't even tell me where he's gone!" Any normal, rational man with even a smidgen of self-respect would know that there was no hope for continuing with such a narcissist. But we have seven more chapters of this. As the man said when he saw such creepiness in his attic, "Nope. No thank you."

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Too wimpy for me bailing out

mattenwmattenwabout 2 years ago

Little did I know that the talk about this author being a real cuckold fan was true. But I haven't read a bigger cuckold author yet!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

She cheated and he is still pussywhipped... XD

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Simple. All the cops in the slut

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Piss on her when she sits down to talk and then walk out. Maybe she'll get the message.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Tom pulled the plug on the affair too soon and now he has a lot of unanswered questions, but this is how Ohio writes his stories. The adulteress will confess, perhaps truthfully in part, and give her side in graphic detail. The information will be devastating to the injured spouse. In 'Revisiting Richard Gronier' Ohio let the affair go on for a while so that the husband could identify the guy and confronted him and force him to end the affair. The husband then observed the wife to gauge her reaction to the affair ending and see if she was honestly committed to returning to the marriage. He never confronted her in the beginning and let her actions guide him. That was a RAAC story from the beginning and more believable even though the wife was just as committed to her love affair as Marianne is. With Marianne we just don't know what story she will tell to explain it all away and what level of truth she is willing to reveal to get past this unpleasantness in getting caught. She is a liar and a professional at weaving stories and spinning truths and facts to suit her client's interests in her public relations job. We read these stories to see what the cheater will do when confronted and to see if they can work their way out of it. Nothing Marianne can say from this point forward can be trusted as she is an unreliable narrator. Tom has allowed her time to think and carefully craft a believable story when he should have kept her on her heels that evening and make her tell her side without preparation. He would have been nearest to the full truth about her conduct but he lets the opportunity pass. He didn't want video evidence and he doesn't want to hear what she has to say in the moment because the truth that she loves another man more than him is more than he can bear, as it rightfully should be.

GuSannGuSannalmost 2 years ago

What the fuck dude?? Dropped! He got her cheating and will get back together? What the fuck! Where is the divorce file? Clearly, he dont pretend to file for divorce..... Because of that, my rate is Dislike!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Why do these guys feel the need to protect their cheating wives from feeling their anger? She lied to him until he had absolute proof and now when he has the chance to make her hurt he gets soft and weepy. Grow a pair you pussy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

He´s already primed to take the cheating bitch back. You watch... This author can make this wimp and this slut a "miracle couple" overcoming lying, mistrust, and disrespect.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I can begin to see where this might be going and I don’t like it at all.

For as often as she’s been cheating over time, forgiveness is miles away.

The continual lying nailed the coffin shut tight,

Bill S.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Egads, what a massive waste of xy chromosomes! Just step out into the main workspace, announce loudly that your wife decided to be a slut, and then have her removed.

Threats only work when you have something to lose. Be a man! Don’t be embarrassed, and try to hide! It’s HER that chose badly, not you.

ZK

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Now it's gone beyond absurd.

He should. THE NEXT DAY, consulted an attorney and had her served. Anything she has to say, is valueless. Hee last call to Eddie was blatant for lack of remorse or guilt. Her only concern is she is going to be divorced.

DITCH. THE. BITCH.

He's only 35, NOT an old man.

Grieve and move on!

HighBrowHighBrowover 1 year ago

He seems to be caving already. Doesn’t bode well for the little cuck…

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

You've grab my attention and I'll read to the end but if you have them get back together They'll never be a reason I find it to be believeable

The only thing you'll be able to do is make a husband look like a worm And put up with anything

ImNotanAnonImNotanAnonabout 1 year ago

Ohio is a bit of a closet cucky boy....so we'll see if he stays true to form in true JPB fashion.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Walk out of rhe office door. Tell Alice loudly "call the police and tell them there is a slut here trespassing in our office. She's offering sex for money. If not me...she'll sell herself to any man in the office for...what was it...100 bucks? 200? Call the police Alice. We can't let whores interrupt our business day."

My guess is she leaves before Alice finishes the phone call.

How stupid is this? A woman like this? Lies so easily. A very long term affair? Fucks her lover on.the very day of her anniversary?

This is a woman that has ZERO respect for her husband.

File for divorce. And move on with life. There is no chance this marriage ever works out. It's just dumb to even consider it.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

This is now BS. The phrase,"You've got to let me explain!" is just a self serving stall to try and mitigate HER pain. Come on Ohio, the thing speaks fir itself. She has zero defense and virtually no room to avoid the truth. Even listening to her is beyond stupid. Also, who gives a shit if she's hurting? And why the impulse to comfort her? As for her threat to make a scene? "Maryanne go ahead. After that I'll everyone we know, and all my office staff, a copy of my recordings. You want a showdown bitch? Go ahead and draw. Make my day."

That sinks her and on to the divorce.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

That last call with Eddie revealed that the slut enjoyed being with him, and would continue to do so indefinitely had they not been discovered. There was not a shred of remorse in her voice or words. Actually, she regretted having to stop seeing the guy.

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No way in hell any self respecting man stays with this slut after hearing that. Of course, with this author, he’ll find a way 😱

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3 ***

Chimo1961Chimo19617 months ago

Heating whores do not get to set any agenda. Call the cops have her ass trespassed. Get a restraining order. Like the cunts do to men

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Surprising. Why does she get to make demands as if she still controls the uncomfortable situation?

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Agree with the Anony from 15 days ago. The last call wasn't anything like, "Dammit, Eddie. I've destroyed the one man I truly love because I was selfish and stupid. I wish we would've never got involved." BUT, instead, she just talks like it's a shame they got caught and she's gonna miss that good dick. Unfortunately, now she is gonna have to stop so she can try to fix things and not have to worry about splitting assets and time with kids. Jeeze... Based of her eagerness to lie and keep it going and that last phone call, it would seem there is no way back from that. Though, as anony mentioned, you will find a way...

rockdoctor63rockdoctor634 months ago

This man is a wimp and she is a psychopathy. She is mentally ill.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Trespass her and have the cops arrest her.

TrainerOfBimbosTrainerOfBimbosabout 2 months ago

I mean, this is an ordinary cheating wife tale so far and the cheating wife is one of the delusional kind that seems to REALLY want to have that affair, shows no remorse over it, but still wants to stay married for some reason. Like literally the worst type - the female moustache twirling villain of the LW subsection, only behind the Hitler-esque wife who demands her husband be a cuck. Basically what I'm saying is that it's not a complex narrative so far dude.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

After hearing her last phone call with Eddie it's obvious she's not sorry about what she did, just sorry she got caught and is now looking at divorce and her little delusional, self-serving world going up in flames with it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

She refuses to leave his office? CALL SECURITY, or the police, to have her ejected. Add a restraining order. STUPID to meet with her alone as that leaves him open to allegations of threats and abuse not mention that she really has nothing to say he needs to hear. The woman is a pathological liar with sociopathic tendencies.

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