All Comments on 'House of Feathers Ch. 01: Loving Bonds'

by TarnishedPenny

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AG31AG313 months ago

You have a great way of turning details into arousal. 5 stars!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Good premise.

Sex too automatic.

Three stars.

Marklynda2Marklynda26 months ago

Looks like a great time will be had by all! A great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

cmj711cmj711about 1 year ago

Mmm, erotic & I love edging themes.

I like denials too ;)

D4RaverD4Raverover 2 years ago

Beautiful, palpable descriptions of incredibly hot sensuality!

AloneTooLongAloneTooLongalmost 4 years ago

great story, part of a series; leaving this review after having read the entire (so far) series. Most chapters are fairly short, very erotic. Be aware there is some 'light' bondage, light 'whipping', anal, partner 'switching', MFF, then MFFF, Interesting that we never know the name(s) of the two main characters tho.

tw63tw63over 6 years ago
Lovely

Such a wonderfully erotic story. Looking forward to tomorrow!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Very creative and enjoyable. Extremely explicit. Can't wait until tomorrow's chapter

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