All Comments on 'House of the Depraved Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Please write more

I love these 2 stories. First one was a little slow (I skipped a lot it), but the second one defiently made up for it. Only problem with it was I had a hard time following how Logan got seperated from his friends and why his friends weren't yelling for him and trying to follow him when the scarecrow thing happened. Anyways, can't wait for you to write more of it. Thanks for the tale, Jess

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
great story

well, this story belongs in the movies. its the same set up a horror movie.i am a horror junkie. It was a little hard to follow during Logan with the scarecrow. What exactly happened with the scarecrow when he was a young boy? Why didn't anyone run after him? Did the vixen poison him some how? I am lost as to what exactly happened. I think you were quite into this part of the story you didn't realize how vivid you were with everything excepted Logan fucking and getting fucked. Please be more descriptive and I would love to read another chapter. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Whorific

Loved it. I think it needs a little refining. But, all-n-all, it's got a sexy Hitchcock feel to it.

<p>So, is there more on the way? Do we get to know about Logan's history? And, what happened to everyone else?

<p> --Tony K.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I keep coming back to this story

I agree with the other comments. What happens to the other characters? I'd love to read more, though after 4 years, I doubt there is more to come...

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Love it

Great story

It's a shame there hasnt been more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I know i’m 15 years late to this but great story, assuming that wasn’t just alchohol he gave them before they entered

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