All Comments on 'House of the Scarlet Rose Pt. 01'

Despite the fact English is not your mother tongue, you have presented a well written story that allows for both those who have imagination, and more importantly, those who lack imagination, to truly revell in a fantasy of unusual capacity. I like it and hope that this is the beginning of an epic series.

One suggestion, you should change the setting and allow people to rate your stories. You might be pleasantly surprised at the results.

Really nice story. It's something you can read and it adds just the right amount of kink to be enjoyable bit not too much.

Thank you for this and please keep writing.