by WetDick4Me
Outstanding story! It's not often that I become a vicarious character in a story. I felt like I was there and experiencing everything happening. I can't wait for the story to continue. It has so much potential. I'll watch for the next chapter.
Fabulously written and developed story.
Wonderful fantasies aroused here.
A truly great story.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
A little long developing the plot and the story. Next chapter they act further on the voyeur/masturbation feeling then her first time. They become BF/GF and continue their voyeur/masturbation fetish.