All Comments on 'House Party'

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MikeAndJanMikeAndJanover 19 years ago
Incredible!

I have to admit to often considering if friends might actually have the same sexual desires as me. But, how would you ask? How would you bring it up? I love the way you introduced this in your story! Great work!

Rich

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Great Start...

Great start of a story that could go on and on. Made me grow hard. Looking forward to hearing more of the exploits of this couple. Maybe with her lunch partners...

tim4522tim4522over 18 years ago
GRRRREAT STORY!! and I Agree with MikeandJan

AWESOME story! I've been trying for more than 2 yrs to convince my wife to swing and while she's considering it, she's still too shy. So reading your story REALLY got my cock hard, just imagining that my bride and I could experience some of the same. LOVE to read more swinging stories by you. You seem to write about the things that turn me on. THANKS!!..Tim

bikefreakbikefreakover 17 years ago
Highly credible writing

This was one of the most "realistic" and credible stories I'e read on this site. I could easily imagine my as-yet-not-swinging spouse following this trajectory into a more sex-positive lifestyle.

Great characters and excellent writing. Please give us more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
NEEDS AN EDITOR

The number of misspellings and grammer errors makes this story almost unreadable for anyone with an understanding of English. Shame. I overlooked the first 5 or 6 but after a while decided too many other stories on this website without this problem. Spell check doesn't work if the word exists but out or our and things like this.

SteveZR1SteveZR1almost 5 years ago
Great erotic tale

Yes, a great read. A nice pace & flow, easy to read.

You've got to love the lusty characters.

Anonymous
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