by call_me_dana
It says - 06/05/09. This story came one day in advance. It was a good story. Dana, good job. Keep it up. And hope your story come one day in advance ;))
This is probably the best paced story I have read on here, but I was a little surprised and disappointed when the the characters became mixed up at the end. The narrator (Stephanie) was referring to herself in the third person. Unless the point-of-view had changed to Samantha, which made no real sense and wasn't indicated, most of the second part was just too confusing. I'd love to read a re-write with this minor problem fixed. Still gets 9/10.
Lesbian story written by gay guy, I guess it takes all kinds. Just don't understand guys writing gay girl stories.
…people who review the author, rather than the work. This was so hot I don't care if it was written by a man, woman, or robot. Very nice. So…is Mindy a lesbian or did Sam just talk her into some naughty fun? The story works either way, I'm just curious. More, please!
I heartily agree with the comment about judging the author rather than the their work. What the hell does the writer's sexual orientation have to do with one's ability to read and appreciate their stories. This is one of the best writers to be found on Literotica--so enjoy.
Great story, just a little confusing in the end. You got a couple of names mixed up, Samantha and Stephanie, but was through enthusiasm of telling the story, so that was okay. Either way, keep writing and I'll certainly keep reading!