All Comments on 'House-sitting Horror'

Many things were unclear. A detailed beginning followed by a suspense would have been great.

While I agree the description (mostly during the actual fucking, post-initial penetration) was a bit light, love the themes. Destructive, terrifying, but amazing sex, hideous, domineering monster, and ESPECIALLY the cum overload (overflow and some darker things connected to that are my strongest kink and I can never find enough of it) are just all right up my alley. Good roots, love the niche, just work on bringing across the sensations for your girls to feel them and enough detail for your boys to be able to step in!

Like the story, I can't wait for the next chapter.

Brutal and hot...please write more!!!

Not sure why this turned me on but my cock is hard as fuck now