All Comments on 'Housekeeping for the Hartmanns Pt. 01'

She seems to be well compensated by her employers!

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So good to see you back, but did you post this before? Feels like I've read it before.

writers submitting here again. She's been missed and it's great she has returned. This site just raised the bar.

Enjoyable, but let me be the first to say wrong category.

Fantastic story. Looking forward to future chapters.

Welcome back, happy to read you. :D

Welcome back (with such a great bang). We missed the particular kind of orgasms your words inspire 💜

I hope you're well & safe at this unprecedented time. I hope writing gives you as much pleasure as reading your work does for us.

as I couldnt make it past half the first page. It is a stroke story, of a live in "Alice" who swings both ways. It is kinda hot, but not my style and the writing is dense, not a lot of dialogue but a lot of meaty paragraphs. These two factors combine to drive me out.

Buy a dog. UGH!

So happy you’re back

Absolutely loved this! I cannot wait to read the rest. I'm so glad to see you're back to writing. You were one of the many authors who inspired me to start writing stories to post here.

I'm so happy to see you're back! I've been reading your stories for years and just happened to stumble on this when you posted it. I'm definitely looking forward to the continuation of this, you've got the roles laid out pretty clearly and I'm hoping to see some ups and downs, maybe even coming around to the fantasy they were discussing in this, getting caught by someone else. One of the kids? A neighbor? You've got a lot set up that makes me hope for more!

Ignore the idiots who posted public comments belittling this, people need to learn to just read stories, not be rude to better authors.

Nice vignette that sets the stage for more. Glad to see you back.

It’s so nice to have you back!!! ❤️❤️

Happy your back writing and sharing it with us. I only read this story in this section because it was yours. Usually stories in the loving wives aren't about loving wives at all, but stories written for a select misogynistic section of readers that only like to read about revenge on non loving wives.( and never about justice served on non loving or ignorant husbands that don't even deserve a loving female as a partner anyway) . Glad to see you're doing justice to the intent of this category as well as weaving your magic story writing again for us... Missed your stories...

This is a such a great story for your return to writing. I await the next story in rapt anticipation! 😍

I have missed your gentle intimacy for so long as with Cape Breton Island. Please addict me again. I now know you here and I will be watching. If you were to be, to write in the Maritimes - I would be floating as the best is there in those people.

great role play idea(s) well written

Lover your writing - this one seems one more chapter as Leah clearly needs more.