All Comments on 'Housemates'

Can't read that MANY pages with that MANY mistakes.

I read an "...I we've" & a "too" (meaning "also") with ONLY 2 letters!

Is that the opening for a longer story or another chapter?

Story was ok, nothing more. One question though, how did Hannah's letter get to him if she didn't know his address?

The post office has a mail forwarding service.

I loved it! Thank you

Five stars here.And I'd really like to see more of these characters -- except Jeff.

-- DaveK7

Those were the days! Even without the modern conveniences.

5

Great to have you writing and posting again. Great story. I hope you follow up with the developing relationship between Jeff and Daniel, Belinda and Trish. As always, a great 5 star read!

Thanks for sharing.

G

Good character development.

Excellent story great character development, excellent erotic story telling, really enjoyed reading it.