by Croctden
A delightful submission! I'm hooked, have done little else this afternoon but read your work. I'm soaked and wriggling around in need. Find myself wishing for a Master to be physically right here and now.
emerald
this was a very hot story....i would love to find a master just like this
It was a good story, started out very well, but it just progressed too quickly, seemingly from her barely knowing him to being his slave in a few minutes or so.
Just the way I like my slaves to be trained. Hard and fast. Want to see more of this story line. I like the way it flowed and keeped me interested.
looking to train a new slave? .... couldnt keep my fingers aways from my snatch! just plain yummy!
What kind of piece of shit gets aroused at someone crying? Utterly detestable.