All Comments on 'Housesitting'

Congrats on your first story. I can always tell if something is good by whether my mind suggests the plot of the next part. This one had me thinking about how she is already fucking her real Mommy and Daddy and this was a set-up from the beginning to get him involved in their family fun. Can't wait to see what happens when her parents come home early and catch them.. Go for it and good luck with your writing. Good Job.

They don't check if I dress like a slit. Did you check David. Yea I wouldn't have either.

Not only was it sexy as hell, it was written well, with believable dialogue and back story. Sometimes stories are just plain sex and hot as hell, sometimes, as in this one there is an extra element that make sit even better. Looking forward to the next installment.

“Chevrolet challenger demon”

Thank you so much for the feedback guys! I’ll have another out soon.

He needs to marry that girl and keep her pregnant and lactating, he needs to lick and suck her everywhere and make her squirt. He needs to tell her she's his now and she will be having his babies.Matter of fact they can be marrried before dad even comes home. She's his slut not a college slut.

you're = you are

your = your car