Houston Goes to Washington Pt. 02

Reading good... thank you.

This is a real spy thriller. Doesn't belong to Literotica. Should be a mainstream novel, like the Bourne series. You could have tried to sell it to a Hollywood producer. Of course you would have to cut down a lot of explicit sex. Still it could be a good movie.

Great story. It would make a very good movie. Try it

Each chapter just gets better and better. Well done 5/5

An action-packed thriller!

I am enjoying this story but I think I will have nightmares for years remembering the idea of exploding male chastity devices!

Literally all your content is copied from one another. Which in turn are just copies of other “loving wives” stories. Your writing is as pathetic as the pathetic cucks you’re write about.

good story, only question is why didn't they stop the sex on the stage with Ryans wife? Was she in on it? Was it really a volunteer wife with the BDSM display?

Like the suspense of the story but the BDSM sex part is not my thing. Arguably this story belongs in the BDSM category since there sure isn’t much “Loving Wife” in this chapter. Also any story with someone pissing on a another person is a huge turn off for me. If it wasn’t for the suspense I wouldn’t normally read the next chapter.

Great cliffhanger.

I really like your stories and I'm thinking that the fires of hell would be safer for the good Senator's wife if anything bad happens to Houston. By the way, are you a Marty Robbins fan?

I don't like having to go back to part 3 from story x to find what linked who else to whom... I'm easily lost.

So for now, i quit.

"At the same time, he also smokes out the person he thinks is trying to undermine him." - Except that Ogilvie wasn't TRYING to undermine him, he found the spreadsheets that Legstrom planted.

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Why was nothing said about the recording Ryan made of his conversation with Legstrom?

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First the Senator is afraid to cooperate, then suddenly he's willing?

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And a waste of time.

But thanks for the effort.

You hung me out to dry again. You know exactly where to stop your narrative for best effect. It's time for Justice and the boys to ride in and help John sort this Nancy and her merry band.of bitches out for good.

Good cliffhanger.....

Although this tale is similar to the earlier one it is just as good and lm loving it.

Scores 5/5, roll on the next chapter.