All Comments on 'How did It Happen? Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I imagine dear Dad with a dad body -- a healthy spray of manly chest hair for his chest and abs, something for Abby to taste and caress. A bit of hair on a man's muscled chest is a real turn on!

Angie314Angie314about 3 years ago

You describe the torment so well!

DevilbobyDevilbobyalmost 3 years ago

I found the story quite moving, I can imagine the guilt he must feel not least because his wife and her mother is in hospital having just undergone surgery, although nothing has been mentioned of her feelings. Interesting.

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