by HS98
First of all, thanks for the shout out. You really didn't have to do that, but I appreciate it. As far as the story goes, I thought it was quite great. You do a good job of setting up the characters and developing the story. I also liked the way you ended it, because it leaves the reader wanting to read the next chapter already. I can tell that you enjoy writing and will be sure to check out future works. -Cheers!
As always, thanks for the kind words and praise. I hope you'll find my other works just as good as this one.
You are rapidly becoming one of my absolute favorite authors in this genre. More, more, more... and PLEASE continue this story!