All Comments on 'How Hard Can It Be?'

There is a reason no book written in first-person has ever become a best seller. Good writing , IF you had written it in third person as every Literary Teacher will tell you.

I guess someone forgot to tell that to Len Deighton and Mark Twain. Go soak your head. :)

brilliant first story. it was getting so hot and horny with my cock standing hard another part would have been good.

I really liked this story. :D I especially liked the part about 'this version of Jack reading my mind', and the description of using the rabbit and fantasising about Jack at the same time. I also liked the closeness of Jill and Jack, and the excerpts from their conversations. :)