by Thors_Fist
It’s funny how the writer views submissive people. He writes like they are sub human and are mindless fuck drones.
I'm still amazed at all the negative comments. It seems like people who don't enjoy stories of this type would have stopped reading it several chapters ago. I believe that they either really love this story but refuse to admit it, or they're jealous that they can't write as well as you do.
Personally I'm enjoying the story a bit, but I'd still prefer that you either add to Beth's story 👍👍, write another story about a submissive woman without a cuckold.
Best chapter so far there’s getting some structure. Struggling with , he’s out of there in 2 months even though he’s made all these connections. What’s Brenda a passing ship or the commencement of a new character. We know nothing of her. Becca needs to control cuckboy at work with out affecting actual work or income. His submission needs to continue with a firm hand. But then again you don’t do all this training to walk out in 2 months. Hated the money spent on wine as $20k is acceptable on a bottle. Big turn off.
hahahaha 1 star and this certainly helps to cut your average score for this story down were it belongs
My opinion - anyone rating a story under a 4 needs to find something else more to their liking to read. Why waste their prcious time. SMALL MINDS.
As for this chapter, I rate it 5 stars. I do find the content somewhat redundant and boring. BRICK has a needed TO DO LIST to straighten out the mess that is PHILLIP and LAURA. Make note - he is just not abandoning them. I deplore some of the really ignorant comments.
As for this continuing harping on BETH. You will write more when the spirit moves you. You are a WRITER, not a MACHINE. Again, 5 stars. Well deserved. DEAR AUTHOR.