by Thors_Fist
Yes other anon, Sore fist likes to waste his time writing lots of crap.... so we can give him the appropriate crap score.
Casey steps up to the plate.....
Here's the pitch....
Holy Cow!! Casey struck right the fuck out!!
Well written but that doesn’t help that this story is boring boring boring.
A more honest title "How I became complete bull"
Seriously, his is getting funnier all the time
Has me wondering how many are you're going to re-invent this broken wheel?
Only 8 comments at this point (9 inc this one). Take that as a clue. LOL
While your writing is still great, I'd rather you spent time continuing Beth's story.
I'm not really into cuck stories but this is better than most. At least you're not spending too much time belittling the husband, or trying to feminize him. Those are big turn offs.
I also could have done without the long drawn out definition and explanation of cucks (boring).
DEAR AUTHOR, are you a closet sex therapist ? Or do you teach at the university level ? Honestly, you lost me in this chapter. I am just not interested in this whole cuckold topic. I am a BDSM GIRL. The depth of your knowledge is amazing, but to me - BORING. Get on with it. Solve the mystery of PHILLIP. Or, did you and that got lost in the plethora of words ? Still, it is YOU, so 5 stars.
Too much psycho babble this time. Could easily have been condensed by 2 pages.
Going down on his ex-wife and then using a condom is pretty stupid. Is he not going to kiss anyone else until the medical checkup clears? Some infections such as herpes can be passed mouth to mouth let alone mouth to pussy.