All Comments on 'How I Became a Cuckold Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
which way

i kind of like the story, but hate that it is unclear what way it will go. if it should continue to my liking, Beth should become submissive to her old boyfrien doing whatever he wants, not stopping if her husband asks, to prove her submissiveness she should be extremely humiliated having her old boyfriend make her beg him to abuse her and having him shaving her bald, get per nipples and cunt pierced and having her getting a tattoo on saying 'I AM RICHARDS SEX SLAVE'

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
The title gives the plot(?) away.

The wife will become a whore and a slut once again and the husband will jerk off his tiny cock every time she 'submits' (Which she will of her own free will) to anyone and everyone. Just take a look at this wimp cuckold writers other stories then you will know exactly how this story will end. Anyone that doesn't want to read about a wimp cuckold husband letting his whore wife get fucked over and over and over again should stop reading this story. But all those cucks and wimps on this site should carry on reading and jerk off their little cocks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
I hope this isnt

going to be another reader wast of time with the wife falling for that shit and the cliche ending . Give her a backbone and if not give the husband complete revenge on all of them at the end , what they are doing even now could give them a prison sentence .Lets see if the guys mouth impresses anybody in the joint . I doubt it , it would most likely earn him a forced asshole enlargement and a shank in the gut after their finished .

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Fairly Obvious Results

If you read the authors other works, the outcome of the story is pretty obvious. I really don't think any outcome other than the wife becoming a slut to BBC is probable.

Vulcan_in_OhioVulcan_in_Ohioover 13 years ago
Wrong category

This really belongs in "Interracial." It seems to be the overwhelming theme for this story. Enough said.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
It just got more stupid

So after setting this up she wants to listen to her husband and tell Richard to piss off. Ok, since the husband is against it.

So why does she and the husband then offer her up to Richard? He's an asshole who forced her into prostitution. So it doesn't make any sense that she's suddenly going to have sex with him.

This is a really messed up story and it sounds lijke she's suddenly going to discover she can't get enough big black cock? If that's true then why did she leave it behind years ago?

Sorry this story has a bunch of inconsistencies and I really hope it doesn't fall into the very predictable pattern that is on the precipice of.

How about for once, just once the husband doesn't get a raging hardon watching his wife get fucked. How about just once a woman in a story isn't just a cunt that needs to filled and abused by a gang of BBC.

And perhaps someone can explain that if these big black cocks are so enthralling and all women worship them and surrender their lives to them, how then isn't the entire world after one generation nothing but black and white mixed race kids with big cocks?

Why would these black guys always bave to be on the prowl for women, and why would they have to yes blackmail and tied up husbands?

I had hoped from the tagline for the story that it had taken a turn away from the same old cliche, but it wasn't a turn around appears to have only been a little slowdown and its about to get back to the same old racist fantasy of the BBC boogey man.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Wrong Category

Actually, this belongs in the Gay Category. We know how it's going to go according to the title of the story. He should just go ahead and let Richard fuck him, and then let himself be turned out as a prostitute, since he has this obsession with cocks and black males, but can't seem to openly admit it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
I thought

Your title stated that he would turn their plans upside down - NO - you turned us upside down.

Re-categorize your story for Interracial and/or Gay because we all know where you are going with this. The Bull & the new cuck.

You Really Disappointed us leading into this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
It took only 3 months for him to get tired of her when she

was younger and hotter and now he wants her again? Seriously? That's the best you got and this whole cockamamie scheme you wrote is supposed to be believable?

ChagrinedChagrinedover 13 years ago
Belongs in a new category

And that category is...Bullshit.

m48gunnerm48gunnerover 13 years ago
Come ON!

Please not another wimp husband story......enough is enough. Use your talent for an interesting storyline, give the husband some balls...it is still against the law to hold someone against their will, there are always options. Lets get out of this cuckold rut!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
put some fucking thought into your postings you moron!

This is just idiotic, it's childish, it defies all basic human nature... weaponx, don't you understand that you make a fool of yourself when you prsent this crap up... you're telling us that YOU think this is good, that YOU think this is worth reading, that YOU think this is even remotely plausible.. so, you're telling us that you are a pathetic, fucking MORON! Stop making an ass of yourself. If you don't have the pride to spend a minimum of 20 minutes on your stories, then don't post them! Have some dignity!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Fantasy Power Game

I would like this author to continue with this fantasy power game story. It is interesting to me to see how the author will move this story along where a loving, married couple deals with their lusts and desires...and consensual submission to a new Master. It is also interesting that critics who already know the genre of the story they are reading will waste their time being upset about the content and verbally lash out in contempt...why bother? Why not read stories in other categories where one does not become upset instead?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
I See Such Trouble Coming Hubby's Way

If Beth doesn't submit herself totally to Richard, I see him inviting a number of clients into the hotel room and having anal sex repeatedly with Hubby while filming it. Beth will leave the room as Richard's prostitute. And Hubby will lose his job when his bosses and coworkers get copies of his anal sex activities with Richard and his friends.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
lame

No "husband" would "wager" the honor of his wife with a terrorist/scumbag/ extortionist. If he did the "marriage" wouldn't be worth the time that was spent getting to know each other, let alone coming up with silly words of so-called commitment.

This writer just wants a reason to defile the honor between married folks. He's also gay, which in itself isn't an issue, except he keeps it in the closet and away from the ones he supposedly "loves" (why else would he desire cocks while married to a woman).

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
One more

One more stupid beyond belief cuckold story. Damn, these things are disgusting.

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