All Comments on 'How I Became a Daddy Ch. 01'

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Xel101Xel101over 5 years ago

Love to read more

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Well done

Looking forward to longer pieces. Would love to see an investigation of the night as an installment!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Fantastic, write more and more often

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Unfinished

Your story had great promise, but you really did not complete it. Why would any guy just up and leave the bed of this highly desirable woman? Obviously, Chapter 2 is needed.

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