All Comments on 'How I Became a Daddy Ch. 04'

Your writing style is great! Great attention to detail without over doing it (which can be common in the genre).

You excel with the bimbofication concept and had a really neat angle applying it to someone less keen initially, like the character Maddie. Non-consensual reluctant bimbofication is a cool new space to look into, like a related mother/sister/girlfriend who is against it at first but eventually is forced/caves into it (implants, weight gain into hourglass figure, lip injection).

If you have a patron I’d love to support it.

I really like the story. Here are some ideas that I had for where the story can go:

Meet Ali’s father, have his wife be ultra submissive and ok with the fact that he has one or more 20 something girlfriends who are his current sex toys and his wife is completely fine with him using his new toy more than her, but also show that he loves his wife and Ali. I think it would be hot if the girlfriend was exotic/Asian

Have Jonny control Ali, have him order for her and maybe have her want to buy something and Jonny say no showing he is in control and looking out for her best interest. Have him call her up and come have sex with him in the library.

I would also like to see Jonny, Ali, and Maddy at a club or party where Ali and Matty get to be very slutty and show off in front of a lot of people. I really like hearing about what they wear and how they act. It’s so hot when Ali talks

Please keep it going, it’s one of the best things I have read on here

I really enjoy your use of Instagram. Of course its up to you, but i'd like to see you take maddie and ali to the library to study maybe. Also agree with above reader, to bring them to the club. Maybe a story about the road trip to Ali's home, and another when they actually get there and meet the parents. Keep up the great story

Wonderful. Will Maddie slowly be corrupted? Either way, please do write more. Particularly sexy how Ali just becomes objectified as a bimbo fuckdoll.

I like this very much!

I'll suggest what I like, you may take it into account or not. All the same I like the story.

Please show how Maddie slowly becomes a Bimbo. One chapter she get's skimpier clothes, the next she gets tanned, the other fake blonde hair, then some piercings and tattoos, then some breast implants, then more tatts.

Also she can become more carefree and dependent on the MC. Maybe even a little bit of an air head. You could add some drugs into it, drinking alcohol, smoking weed, maybe even some cocaine or acids.

At the same time the MC can become more controlling and dominating. Maybe with Ali whispering to him how he can corrupt Maddie even more.

Keep going, I really love this.

Excellent progression. Slow methodical and Has the potential for More character development.