All Comments on 'How I Came To Love Laura'

Hi everyone, this is my fist story and I would be most pleased to receive any comments about my work. Your thoughts on either the storyline or on the writing style itself would be most appreciated.

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Jinni

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What I enjoy about your writing style is its naturalistic quality. At times it feels like reading a diary or a confessional and that gives the tale an extra bit of naughty spice ;)

This refreshing approach is also present in your second story (the very interesting "Cassy" ) which is no mean feat seeing as it's told in the third person!

Keep writing 'cos I think you're good.

I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. Articulate, with a wonderful

and natural rhythm. It doesn't fall into the formulae that

many stories in this section do, instead being fresh and

exciting. Strongly recommended to other Lit readers.

This would've made a good series if the author had continued it. Such a shame. I really enjoyed it.

I love all the feminine sexual energy here.