by jacqui4u2
While the story wasn't bad, the way the story is formatted makes reading it most difficult.
You are far too few paragraph breaks, and where you do have paragraph breaks, it is for no reason other than ??
Most difficult to read.
Yes the story is difficult to read. But it is also a waste of time to try. The wife(??) character did not fix her marriage. She just made it impossible to really repair. The only thing left is to be found out, and the marriage is over. On second thought is that a fix? Maybe for the husband.
Cheers!
This woman "fixed" her marriage. This is possibly the worst piece of crap about a slut supposedly trying to "fix" her marriage I've ever read, there should be some sort of rating system here for innocent bystanders who don't want the kind of the kind of ending that sorry excuse of a story had, or more correctly said, did not have.
I can't believe that this woman considers cheating on her husband fixing her marriage. Now if the husband had consented with her having sex with those other people, it would have been another story. The two of them would have been WORKING on their marriage then if both of them were involved.
her husband may know far more than he lets on, and just getting evidence before he acts. its silly to think he'd be so oblivious, but that is something she'll deal with. consequences. good for her to be satisfied, but not have him to feed her, etc
does the "fix" create other problems and spark a change in her life? and of course, the husband with an ex-wife.
You just successfully turned youself into a selfish two bit whore and a really bad example for you kids. Don't worry though, your husband will figure it out soon enough and you will be single again, when he kicks your slimey slutty ass to the curb. Good luck to you then.
Cindy is her pimp. When hubby finds out and he will, she will be walking the streets.
Selfish bitch did not fix anything to do with her marriage except to trash it. Instead of working with hubby she just cast him aside just like trash.
Interesting how the bitch complains about his work but not the things that go with it, but she will learn when she gets to live in a run down trailer park real soon.
Yep, she fixed her marriage. Ran it right into the rocks. Her husband finds out, she is dumped, loses her chilldren , house, home and neighbor friends. What a wonderful plan to "FIX" a marriage.
you go off and marry someone while hubby turn into a sad sack of shit like Real Doc. A lonly lunatic troll.
could be true and right on... many men work their fingers to the bone to put a quality of life on the table... the wife is at the home and boredom takes over and out of control.. You have a very good story but lacks structure to make a proper presentation... I suggest you consider a rewrite...
Hows the Divorce going. You fixed your marriage real good slut
She went about fixing problems the wrong way.
The husband is risking std just sleeping with wife after 12 hour days.
Cheating so blatantly and locally going to end in anything but divorce?
Story smells like a well used c**t
and rates a 0
The story itself was good but you need to learn some basic English. A paragraph in your story is like every 50 sentences regardless if break in ideas. This makes reading your stories much harder then need be. Please add more paragraph breaks; when speaker changes or thought or idea changes. This is high school stuff.
All this wife us going to get from her husband is a divorce. Then she'll be free to fuck who ever she wants.
You didn’t fix your marriage. At best you abandoned your marriage, your vows, and any sense of decency and self-respect you might have had. I feel terrible for your husband. Do him a favor and divorce him. He deserves better than a woman who spreads her legs for anyone that gives her the time of day.
Who wants to read a simple boring story of a married cheating slut grunting on various cocks. It would be much more interesting if her husband caught her and her lover in the act and bludgeon them to near death.