All Comments on 'How I Got Sucked Into Threesome Sex'

Crap and shit story like those dregs on streets of kolkatta

Don't pay attention to those who won't post a name. Nice story, got me hot.

This was great, looking forward to more!

Seriously, proof rea this crap twice before submitting or get someone to act as an on-line editor. Story was ok.

is necessary on comments too....especially if you are going to complain about others not doing it

What threesome? The wife sends the husband away so the friend can fuck his wife. This is cuckoldry . That is a Fetish Indian boy. Put it there. Real crap story.

With control of the language here, it does make it very difficult to read. As a result my score is generous. But don't give up, it will get better, and perhaps an editor could be an asset?

that some posters, usually US posters, cannot accept that there are many styles of English other than their own. There are many more English-speakers in India than there are in the US, and likely the whole English-speaking world put together.

Their usage and development of the language is as valid as that defined by Webster, or the Oxford.

Let me apologize for being a bad writer, in fact, I am not a writer at all. I am not here to prove anyone that I am a master story teller but just to document few of the adventure I had in last 8 years among with swingers. And yes I do know how to spell cuckold but my friend isn't in it. I just wrote the factual incident, how it all started. What latter happened that night was to come in the next part but I guess, I better abandon my plan in the wake of this thrashing.

There is a standard for written English that is the same regardless of where the English is used. Whether it is in the UK, the USA or India, written English is (or should be) the same. Within that framework, however, the usage and vocabulary can be unique. This story did not fulfill the basic requirements of standard written English. I could not get by the first few paragraphs because I was left totally confused and frustrated. Regardless of the quality of the story, if it is not in a readable format, it fails.

It obviously wasn't a story written by an aspiring author. It was a tale written by someone who wants to share his adventures, outside his birth language.

For that, I am grateful. It was certainly understandable for me so I would like to thank Bluebull for his contribution.

Perhaps if I could speak Hindi I might feel an urge to correct his English. Until then I shall enjoy his tales as he sees fit to write them.

Good effort. What matters most in a story is the plot and your story had a good plot, as real life incidents provide the best plot. However language and style of writing also contribute and can build-up or ruin a story. Please read stories posted by me and if you like them, you can take my help to finalize before posting.

Why are all the whore wives described as shy, conservative, or reluctant? Obviously they're anything but.

Idiot is nothing but a dildo for cuck and whore.