All Comments on 'How I Made my Maternal Aunt Happy'

You need a much better English translator, either that, or learn to write..........

Don't be discouraged. It was a good story underneath. You told a lot in a really short story - many others don't do that well. Try reviewing each paragraph one at a time, one sentence at a time, in backwards order. That way you can see that each really means what you want and says it the way you want it. Punctuation and grammar errors are easier to catch. Best of luck!

Hot story!!!!!!

I want to try that with my aunt is it possible???