by rumpleminty
This is really as amazing writing on the site as it can get.
Kudos to the brains that are working on this one.
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Like the story more than the sex, very entertaining and good for a laugh. Well done indeed
10 for 5. If this waws excellent, I'd give it a 5. Instead, it should earn a 10. It's one of best I've read. FABULOUS STORY.
Damn good stuff rumpleminty. I will be part of the group that waits for the major plot twist in the end.
This is so amazing that I’m already invested in Sean and trying to work out who he ends up with, I can’t wait for more
You write extremely well. Your story line, plot development and flow of action is smooth and clean, with a true reality feel to it. Only one criticism... you need to proof your work for typos and inconsistent grammar and sentence construction. Nonetheless.. I gave you a 5.
i really enjoy how he keeps falling into these "connections" impressing people with his humbleness and humor more than anything else. This is very well done.
This series has a been a lot of fun so far! I knew a couple of these folks at the time you're writing (I'm guessing 2005-06 based on these two chapters), through friends of friends; the only thing that's obviously not accurate is Evan Seinfeld- he was way bigger of an abusive, dickish shit stain. But hey, creative license, right? ;)
I love this story-line. Being a huge fan off porn, and especially the female porn stars, it is soooo great to see them presented in a fun, loving, and positive way!! I, like Sean, want each of them,!! But i'm especially looking forward to sex with Cassandra. Most Excellent Rumpleminty!!
Sean is my idol. I could live vicariously through him. The dude is a sex god, who got a porn actress to orgasm 4 times on his dick before he nutted. Then she wants to cuddle and make out, Oh My God. I'd cum from merely holding or kissing a goddess like Sara. And he did the same to Sunny the night before. Wow! Sean is on his game.