by Norway_1705
Too much rambling by the author in this story. That kinda takes away the erotica.
I found the story quite exciting and would gladly read any additional parts to it.
Nicely done. Your command of English is probably better than many of the readers. Open-minded, positive, and interesting. Please keep giving us great stories.
This was really good. Kept me interested the hole time. And yes please give it at least a second part.
Especially considering you are ESL, this was good. I'd LOVE to have my wife's daughter do this to me - even though I'm over 70 and she's right at 50. I do believe she's capable - she's the sexiest, hottest lady I know; we've talked a lot.