by The_reader94
For pity's sake finish this story. No sane person would have put up with this shit. Burn her and marry Bella.
no trust no marriage.why would a man want a wife that a whoreslut for a another man.
We know now that she was unfaithful even at the dawn of their marriage.
We know now that she's a deceitful twat to to pass one child as his own ( well although we don't know her side of the story).
We also know that in truth she rather be with Derry instead of him when it comes to sex and/or reproduction.
We know that Sarah ( poor Sarah) will be paying for her mother's mistakes.
So my question to you author is does he gets his balls back and dump the bitch and Sue Derry for child support?
In the meantime, 2 Stars
Last time I checked, fishing a turd back out of the toilet isn't called "winning". If this is part 5, I genuinely cringe at the thought of what's already happened to lead up to this dumpster fire.
What kind of person reads this? In fact what kind of person puts up with this shit from his wife?
ABSOLUTELY no reason to want her back... one more exceptional screw and then show her the doof and the DNA test.
Why do you persist with this story of a spineless worm? Frankly, with someone like him, he damn near deserves a cheating slut wife. Why didn't you go all the way and feminize him? Shave off all his body hair, put a prince albert through his cock and his cock in a chastity cage. I mean, how much lower could you drag him. Now we find his slut wife has him raising a bastard child of her lover. Does he now file for divorce and sue the arsehole for child support backdated? No of course not. This makes me sick.
Plus, how does that manipulative bitch Bella know all this info... and hasn't told him previously?
Why is Derry still breathing? Slow death by torture and dump his body .
And not the river in Egypt. The title is wrong. There is no “win” for Noel.
He is losing now as he is humiliated and his wife is unfaithful slut. He is obviously not man enough to keep her and is submissive to Bella. The_reader is confused. He writes that Noel is going without sex but Bella gives him blow jobs.
He loses if his wife stays with him. What man would want her? And now he has no daughter. Why has The_reader created this disaster? Obviously the author longs to be a submissive cock sucker.
The plot continues to swirl down the toilet.
now is the time to burn the bitch and her lover find out who is sperm donor for sarah and go after child support back and future as well as college expense and ask the slut how many lovers she has and had give the slut the choice him and sarah or derry time to pull the plug on the whore
Ain't enough love and commitment in the wife's heart to fill a gnat's ass, kick her ass under the curve. Pussy!!
The neighbors curb on fire. Derry would have broken arms, legs, no teeth, and no dick.
I estemate that in the end he ends up with his wife, his daughter (even if not by blood), the dudes (ex)wife, and even the friend and the dude don't get shit cause of his ego. Looses it all.
each week my IP shifts and is no longer recognized by the site I will come back to these and given them one star
That is how much I hate this authors narrative
‘Sarah is not my daughter," I managed to reply.’ Good news for her.She dodged a bullet. How the heck could she look up to a wally like him?
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is becoming interestinger,and interestinger as it unfolds. I'm glad I chose to hang
around.
i cant belive that god has made human beings like u..... disgusting little creature with absolutly no self respect?
"Noel! I am your wife. You may not be good in bed, but you are a good husband. I appreciate that," she said as if she was trying to console me.
===> oh please. This is just nuts.