All Comments on 'How It All Began...'

by AmateurWif

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SamanthaSmithSamanthaSmithover 3 years ago

Short, and leaves me with a good feeling. Very similar to your dream of 2015. Love to see more of your writing...

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Not really a story

More like an opening paragraph. Why bother?

LustyScribeLustyScribeover 3 years ago
Off to a great start!

Looking forward to the impending "corruption" of those values LOL! Well done on this, and thank you for sharing your story!

Franglais83Franglais83over 3 years ago
More please

Great opening that has whetted my appetite for more. Soon please.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Wish you had continued this

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