All Comments on 'How It Started'

slipping a finger in the back door does not an anal story make.

As for criticism, there's not much to criticise. It's a nice story. There are a few issues with punctuation and grammar, but nothing terribly distracting. And some people prefer a longer build-up, but not all. I assume there's going to be a second part...hope you go for it, even if it's pure fiction.

A horny, virgin teenager wrote it. That's not anal scooter.

I say we give Chris 62 a break for no cock entering an ass. He did say it was the beginning of his anal obsession. His beginning was a finger in his girlfriend's ass. I'm sure it grew (no pun intended) from there. If he turns it into a short series and he fucks an ass or two, I say we let him off the hook. Good setup if he takes it further. Keep writing.