by JPokay99
The story was very good while it was consensual play, but once you brought in the other three parties you change it to non-consensual/rape which as far as I'm concerned turned the story to a P.O.S.
Thanks for the criticism. I admit that the non-consensual part was meant to be somewhat in the fetish realm of some of the hentai's out there. I personally would never condone that sort of thing in real life. It's all fiction.
-Cheers
I enjoyed this story!
I don't really get the readers comments, that it is not politically correct? gee and posted on an erotica website?
Thanks for the story, keep em coming ;)
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