by rockandroller
Fantastic! Mark, I need Allie to help me for a few minutes in my bedroom was needed at the last ending it there and the reader's imagination.
Thanks for a very entertaining 4 chapters
This is a top of the list for great stories. You can write a story like that for me any time.
I read the Caroline and Katherine one (I loooove the young girls in stockings!) so I went through your list and was surprised by the fact that one of my other favorites was there and that I hadn't checked out your library before.
The ending here was absolutely outstanding, just the way it should have gone for the budding cumslut to give herself to and take her daddy.
Great story, and I love how you were able to take five whole chapters to get to Daddy.
I also love the fact that you let it finish at five chapters. I can't believe all the imagination-challenged people who want more. There's no better way to ruin a story than to take one that's complete and add "bulk".
Your writing talent is only out down by you amazing imagination ... No story has ever been hotter or covered more erotic situations ... From the innocent start to the incredible ending ... you have surpassed our expectations with each chapter and left us wanting more each time.
I only hope there are more chapters coming ...
Thank You for Sharing.
Brilliant, took me back my childhood sexperementing with my girlfriends. Very hot.
Amazing! Definitely my favorite writer on this site, keep it up!
your story brought back memories .hard as a rock now thinking of the past .Thank you
Nat your stories were so intreging I myself have a young daughter but I would never have thoughts of having sex or anything close to it with her. Continue with your writings and I will read them with warm respects and well wishes. Rocky
You're one of the best writers on LitErotica. I've been looking for something that's tantalizing AND well written (sometimes the latter can be hard to find...) and you've done an exceedingly good job on both ends. I want another chapter and more stories from you!
Great series. I came like three times on each chapter. I think you should add a few more chapters to it though. I want to see Bobby finally get sum.
well i couldnt stop reading the series till i had read them all, they were awesome
really, really hot... i'd like a chapter on losing ass virginity too though!! keep up the good work
I have read quite a few sex stories. This is without a doubt the best one yet. I would like to have more chapters though. The only unbelievable part of this story, in my opinion, was the fact that pain was not mentioned during both girls losing their virginity! Other than that, you are a very gifted writer. With a style like no other I have read. Thank you! Totally anonymous!!!
The story keeps building with many climaxes. You still need another chapter.
that was one kick ass story, i hope the author continues it!
I want more of this story....needs a couple more chapters...
What a series. My mouth is watering, my pussy's dripping and my clit is throbbing!
this series is awesome! i hope the author will continue with it.