All Comments on 'How to be a Good Son'

ok mostly until the end,just seemed to fizzle out,otherwise not bad for first time

Herrlich, romantisch, wunderschön !!!

Vielen Dank für deine schöne Geschichte.

So sollte die Welt, die Wirklichkeit sein.

Weird beginning premise, that the mom wants to be raped. After that, just an elongated fairytale.

Very good read, kept my interest. Nice guy gets the prize, definitely a fantasy story. Next please.

Hate the ending. They -Jason and his mom should have ended up together. Adding the others ruined the whole story.

Such a poignant story of love Beautiful end with mother and son possibly finding knowledgeable love.

PS-42 cemented my infatuation with my mother as I saw her arousal. And, my desire for older woman.

I really wanted to get into it and I love a long good story but page one just didn’t like how it was written. Almost like someone reading me instructions on how to put something together.

A well written story you start feeling the emotions of the characters and I didn’t get that. Also if I don’t get that on page one then the next 6 pages are in likely to get me there. So I bailed. **

Not too bad need to work on slightly changing the way each character "talks" using the same stylistic voice regardless of who is speaking breaks the immersion. Also, shutter is what you put on a window to keep things out. Shudder is what a woman does when she orgasms. Prowl is what one does to hunt for a mate. Prow is the very front of a boat.

Great first story please keep writing more stories.

Really enjoyed it till they got on vacation. Now I’m not sure. The ending just has me on the fence.

Loved this story but you should have wrote more into it 5 stars

Loved this chapter gave it a 5!!!!!!!!!!!!!!