by DZiegler
Because you are a fucking idiot... Completely typical guy, never satisfied with what he has; always has to have something better.
AND the same mentality is exhibited by the writer. Sometimes, you can get too cute with a story. The cuteness detracts from what, otherwise, COULD have been a decent story. The mentality exhibited by the character and by the creator are completely unnecessary.
Nice story. Extremely hot. Loved the attention to the details. You are great!