by Boadicea
This had everything a werwolf lover could want. Love, sex, jealous, a bad guy, confusion and contention. It was absolutely wonderful and well worth the time I took from my own writing to read it. Beautiful work. I'll be reading more of yours.
You have to continue writting this is one of the best stories I've read in a while and I read alot. Bravo! you can only get better.
that was a really good story. well written characters flashed out great. grammar and proof reading a few errors, but nothing to take away form the story looking forward to more.thank u for sharing.
u hav to continue i couldnt believe u ended it u can go much further this is the best story ive read so please continue
I have been a fan of werewolf and vampire fiction since I picked up a first edition copy of "I Am Legend". I collect all things wolfish, and this story is a monumental event. You are insane if you don't follow this up, and even crazier if you don't pursue publishing. It as good as any I've read. Ever.
I love short stories and this was especially sizzling! Keep up the good work!!!
I really enjoyed your story. John is HOT, sexy and romantic. I love werewolves anyway. Please write more!!!
As a long-time devoted fan of your stories, I'd have to say that was your Masterpiece. Original, exciting, romantic, sexy and adventurous. Well Done! :D
I've been hoping for a while that you would update...and I just love this story! You are a fantastic writer!
I think I just came. This story was beyond AMAZING!!!
PLEASE tell me you are going to write more stories like this one.
The way you write makes me wish these characters were real.
Thank you SO much for this story :)
This story was such a great read. On the endless drone of stories that lack depth or climaxes, this was a refreshing adventure! Thank you for sharing!
Love this story! I could go into specifics and say that this story is one of those that the woman is not hapless... she has her own strength that her mate not only recognizes but values as a factor in her worth....They work together for a cause...I could go on and on
I will read your other stories and hope for more....
Thanks for making my snow day enjoyable
okay i know some people are saying you need to right more but truth is it is perfect the way it is. i give you 5 stars, which is saying a lot because i usually don't vote.
I've rarely seen such depth of character on here. keep writing!
This story is so HOT! I just LOVED it!! Please, please keep writing!
One of the best i have read so far,keep up the good work!!!Hope you have more coming out soon..
This is so hot!! I love your writing very much!!
Xxx,
Pinkyboot
I enjoyed reading this story. It was a page turner. I hope to read more of your work.
but I had to add my own.
I wonder why you stopped posting. I hope it was because you turned pro.
Thanks again.
I really never liked john from the beginning since he took advantage of her he's an asshole and arrogant to me I really didn't like him. It was like all there relationship was based on sex I didn't feel the love between them. They didn't even try to get to know each other. All I saw there was lust. Idk I just didn't feel like they were mates.
Are these written mostly by men, for men? Or are there really women out there who want to be told who their mate is without having any choice in the matter? I mean, yeah, I guess there are also women who like guys who beat them, too.
It would be one thing if there was a love dynamic that had been built between characters so that, regardless of pack hierarchy, the man actually took her opinion into consideration instead of just being some domineering prick. Thing is, regardless of whether they have animalistic urges, they supposedly have human intelligence, so the idea that women are at the bottom of the totem pole when it comes to who gets to have control is absolutely 100% unsexy. Every once in a while there is a good werewolf story, but sadly, most of them are just tales about women being useful for nothing more than cooking and popping out "cubs". It's sorta like the authors are trying to write a bondage/discipline story but forgot to give the woman an opportunity to choose whether she wanted to get tied up, first.
Yeah, she didn't kick him in the balls. She did tell him 'no', though, and that really should be good enough. Just because she was 'horny' doesn't give a guy the right to tear her clothes apart and fuck her. That's like saying it's ok to fuck a chick into whose drink you dumped an overdose of aphrodisiacs.
Sorry, just had to get that off of my chest.
Hmmm, not really that impressed tbh, just leaving aside the errors in the writing, the author has a distorted view on what an actual M/F relationship looks like, plus what’s with the steak, steak, steak, wine, rice, steak? It’s like a bovinian distortion of Ponty Mython’s spam skit, between the excess steak consumption, the chains (wtf?) the non-con sex and the really oddball Jason (Human Steak), I’m pushing the boundaries of generosity in giving this a 3⭐️.
I suspect the author went into politics shortly after submitting this piece fwiw.
Liked the story but was a little puzzled with the confrontation with Void at the campfire. Kind of contrived with her finding him first, even with John flying around looking for him. Much of the story seemed to be just enough story to string the sex scenes together.