by Joeehartley
Reading this story line makes me look at some of the women at work like this guy does to Rose. Keep up the good writing!
Still a good premise.
Moves ahead, but really lacks the details that would make it much more erotic.
When each tells the other how he/she likes to perform orally, there needs to be dialog/discussion between them.
Is that the way you like it?
Do you like your balls played with while you're getting a blowjob?
Do you enjoy being fingered while your pussy is being eaten?
And you wrote: "Her blouse although not completely shear..." You meant SHEER, not SHEAR.
Four stars.