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bigredkerbigredkeralmost 5 years ago
You Just Keep Expanding The Sexual Antics of These Two!

Reading this story line makes me look at some of the women at work like this guy does to Rose. Keep up the good writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Still a good premise.

Moves ahead, but really lacks the details that would make it much more erotic.

When each tells the other how he/she likes to perform orally, there needs to be dialog/discussion between them.

Is that the way you like it?

Do you like your balls played with while you're getting a blowjob?

Do you enjoy being fingered while your pussy is being eaten?

And you wrote: "Her blouse although not completely shear..." You meant SHEER, not SHEAR.

Four stars.

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